A Dancer Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Dancer

Rating: 5.0


She writes such poems,
I could never write.
In the colorful flash lights,
her silky brown hairs,
her naughty eyes,
her belly her legs,
her smiling pink lips,
her breasts her hips,
her round arms,
her hidden charms,
when write a poem,
in the body language,
the poem is read by all.
I have limited readers,
who read and understand,
my poems are not universal,
her readers are not limited,
she writes universal poems,
I am in a cage,
she is on stage,
she is a lovely dancer!

A Dancer
Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

And her dance is for some moments but your poems are for ever and ever with the readers to read and enjoy......With age she will fade but your poems will pick up with the passage of time....To me moments of stage is ok but long live the poet who is at the back stage.........Loved it, nicely written poem..100 on 10.

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Khalida Bano Ali 12 October 2015

An amazing poem..............................................

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Loke Kok Yee 12 October 2015

Couldn't agree with Mohammed more, I just want to repeat that this is a lovely poem. Thank you

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Kelly Kurt 12 October 2015

The poetry of female beauty is read aloud and universal. But as Mohammed has stated, transitory. A picture or movie may transport it, to some degree, into the future, but skillfully written poems, like those of Akhtar Jawad, will endure in their full glory for as long as man exists

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 October 2015

A wonderful poem on a dancer! Loved it. Full.....10

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Mj Lemon 16 May 2018

This is one of my favourites, Akhtar. You remind that the best poet is one who can tame language and then make it dance!

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Indira Renganathan 28 November 2017

writers who lack in imagination and originality should read your poems...what a wonderful creativity you have! ! ..interesting and amusing poem...thank you very much

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Amitava Sur 21 October 2015

Very true Akhtar vai You being a poet believe and depend on your scripts, She being a dancer catapults With her jerks and flips. Language is regional or sectoral whether dance form is universal Result, she wins with her jerks and flips! !

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Bisma Mirza 14 October 2015

AMazinggggg really..10 on 10

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Valsa George 13 October 2015

This is so very imaginative as many of your poems are! she writes universal poems, I am in a cage, she is on stage, she is a lovely dancer! ......................Wonderful conclusion! !

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