She writes such poems,
I could never write.
In the colorful flash lights,
her silky brown hairs,
her naughty eyes,
her belly her legs,
her smiling pink lips,
her breasts her hips,
her round arms,
her hidden charms,
when write a poem,
in the body language,
the poem is read by all.
I have limited readers,
who read and understand,
my poems are not universal,
her readers are not limited,
she writes universal poems,
I am in a cage,
she is on stage,
she is a lovely dancer!
An amazing poem..............................................
Couldn't agree with Mohammed more, I just want to repeat that this is a lovely poem. Thank you
The poetry of female beauty is read aloud and universal. But as Mohammed has stated, transitory. A picture or movie may transport it, to some degree, into the future, but skillfully written poems, like those of Akhtar Jawad, will endure in their full glory for as long as man exists
A wonderful poem on a dancer! Loved it. Full.....10
This is one of my favourites, Akhtar. You remind that the best poet is one who can tame language and then make it dance!
writers who lack in imagination and originality should read your poems...what a wonderful creativity you have! ! ..interesting and amusing poem...thank you very much
Very true Akhtar vai You being a poet believe and depend on your scripts, She being a dancer catapults With her jerks and flips. Language is regional or sectoral whether dance form is universal Result, she wins with her jerks and flips! !
This is so very imaginative as many of your poems are! she writes universal poems, I am in a cage, she is on stage, she is a lovely dancer! ......................Wonderful conclusion! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And her dance is for some moments but your poems are for ever and ever with the readers to read and enjoy......With age she will fade but your poems will pick up with the passage of time....To me moments of stage is ok but long live the poet who is at the back stage.........Loved it, nicely written poem..100 on 10.