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A Falling Soul

A soul falling deeper
and deeper into despair
calling out for someone
to be there

As the souls merge as one
to relight and raise
the falling soul
a peaceful calm engulfs
the earth

As they all rise together
they all know,
unlike the living they will
always be one

Submitted: Tuesday, June 05, 2012


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  • Patricia Grantham (2/27/2013 7:25:00 AM)

    Hello Dave: A thought provoking poem, this one really gets to the soul
    of the matter(smile) . I definitely like it! Thanks.

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (2/17/2013 10:55:00 PM)

    The poem is pure and sterling, motivating all souls to unite and be one! ! GREAT! !

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  • Swetha Vvr (6/25/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    calling all souls to unite............special piece! !

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  • Captain Cur (6/18/2012 8:14:00 PM)

    Rattle the chains.
    Short but potent.
    Lots of meaning here.

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  • Simon Collins (6/6/2012 1:14:00 AM)

    This poem works for me, thanks

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  • Smoky Hoss (6/5/2012 4:49:00 PM)

    Very good Dave, so well put!

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  • Heather Wilson (6/5/2012 12:29:00 PM)

    Another soul for group therapy, a write to think about.good one.

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  • Charles James (6/5/2012 10:00:00 AM)

    If only the living could learn that lesson! Great poem!

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  • Eric Cockrell (6/5/2012 9:35:00 AM)

    therein lies the hope of humanity! thought provoking!

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