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Dave Alan Walker
Poems by Dave Alan Walker : 6 / 280
A Free World
Oh lord see me
tell me I'm still free
I see non existent chains
wrapped around me
In a world of opportunity
I thought we was free
but I have a feeling
some ones watching me
Oh lord save me
take all these eyes off of me
why is there no peace
in the land of the free
It seems to me
the only way anybody can be free
is if they are not breathing
Dave Alan Walker
Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, January 22, 2013
Poems by Dave Alan Walker : 6 / 280
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THE LAST THREE LINES MAKE THE POEM SUPERB ! Longing for peace and a free world is what all of us desire. Very nice poem! !
Precious stone cant shine like this poem, you did it brighter! _Soul
freedon is a thought.
implemented in true color.
result will be in favour of every one.
need is to understand freedoom.
Great poem, and very true. Love it!
Once in a while we feel like this, particularly when we are sad! Nice poem!
Good poem Dave, Big brother isalways watching! No one is ever free. Thanks
as long as freedom is bought and sold, there can be no freedom!
Too right Dave, guess it will be onward going, invisible chains holding on to us, and a few very visible, such is life.
Well said Dave, it used to be a free country, but it seems that our freedom is being eroded away bit by bit, and slowly but surely.
I agree with you. Man is in chains everywhere. When shall we be free? Great write. Thanks for sharing