Asif Andalib

Rookie (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

A Life Full Of Tragedies - Poem by Asif Andalib

Where sweet dreams turn into horrific nightmares
Where how you feel nobody really cares
Where whatever you do bears no fruit
Where you become a tree without root
Where efforts are useless and bring despair
Where happiness is like mirage and rare
There how will you find love and peace?
It’s a life full of tragedies!


Comments about A Life Full Of Tragedies by Asif Andalib

  • Rookie Virginia Pecho Gely (10/27/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    As I've written in one of my poems:
    It is in bitterness, that we even appreciate our love's sweetest moments.
    This poem is sad and full of despair.
    The poet is looking for love?
    I believe that without one, life will never be complete.
    Continue to hope, your destiny is not yet over. A very good write. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Shivani Gupta (10/13/2012 6:13:00 AM)

    Well written..nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Frank (popeye) Pulver (9/26/2012 7:20:00 AM)

    I like this one very much, I always makesure that I put a twist in the end of my thoughts because i never know who is going to read my poetry. I try to put a positive thought just to let them know that there are other ways at looking at life.

    I truely love this one though (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 49 Points Anita Sehgal (9/16/2012 12:15:00 PM)

    Despair and disillusion well mirrored (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Johnathan Juarez (5/4/2012 3:23:00 AM)

    Great poem buddy very well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Cristina Teodor (1/7/2012 2:12:00 AM)

    This poem rise like a cry of despair, you showed so intense in expression the torment of a life that seek for meaning. Beautiful written..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points George Bernard Hough (11/26/2011 6:54:00 PM)

    A complete contrast to `A Gift From God` but still with feeling.
    Keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pari Dharawat (11/22/2011 10:56:00 AM)

    Nice rhyme, true lines, lifes a tragedy,
    It seems living is a crime.
    But ofcourse we are going live, and if we are living,
    why not start over with a new begining.
    To lifes adversaries, always say, hey try me!

    Nicely written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (10/1/2011 10:38:00 AM)

    Tragedies at times at randon asks a lot of questions like ur poems..society is unprepared to answer as society has no solutions...so goes adding on to the cards of tragedies..well written piece (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,930 Points Dave Walker (9/14/2011 1:50:00 PM)

    Finding love is hard. Finding love and peace
    Thats another ball game. Good poem. May I
    Invite you to read my new poem called,
    Justice part 1. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 239 Points Renu Kakkar (9/13/2011 9:56:00 AM)

    learning lessons is part of life
    facing of adversities and strife
    learning of love and to share
    of looking after others with care
    patience and tolerance
    peace and spreading happiness
    you do all these
    others will reciprocate (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 13, 2011



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