Suraj Samtani

Rookie - 40 Points (Hong Kong)

A Mathematical Relationship - Poem by Suraj Samtani

I now realise the value of time.
In less than a quarter, our distances have been multiplied.
Our communication has been divided.

In the moments to come, I hope to add more special memories,
And subtract the obstacles of our relationship.

May the intensity of our love be inversely proportional to every wave that falls in the Niagara.

May our Love for each other expand into the universe, and
May it be then integrated with the Higher Source
Until time reaches infinity, and beyond.


Comments about A Mathematical Relationship by Suraj Samtani

  • Gold Star - 41,411 Points Chinedu Dike (2/21/2015 11:41:00 AM)

    Very brilliant, using mathematical variables to quantify and qualify a romantic relationship is poetically very remarkable. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,017 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/19/2014 10:48:00 PM)

    May the intensity of our love be inversely proportional to every wave that falls in the Niagara.

    If intensity of love varies inversely according to waves, the product of intensity and wave will remain constant, i.e., if the waves will be on lower side the love will be on higher side. If so poet means the waves that affect love and friendship should decrease so that love may increase. A nice idea, i liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 219 Points Prasanna Kumari (9/19/2014 9:50:00 PM)

    love mathematically expressed is well written and beautiful with a universal appeal... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,599 Points Kay Staley (9/19/2014 11:44:00 AM)

    It doesnt really sound like a poem because of 0% rhyme scheme. Just a friendly hint: It would look better if you changed the format on this sight...you dont have to change what you wrote, just hit enter more often and it would look more orderly. The first two paragraphs go along nicely with the name and idea, but the last two arent very good. The references in them are so off the wall and its hard to understand why they are there. If it was longer with more paragraphs like the first two, and had at least a semblance of the rhyme scheme, it would be much better. On the positive side, it is a good idea and has appeal for its unique (mathematical) view. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,219 Points Oduro Bright Amoh (9/19/2014 3:26:00 AM)

    Very very interesting to read. Keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 41,590 Points Roseann Shawiak (1/26/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    Loved your use of mathematics in this poem. Life revolves around equations and
    formulas in math, you expressed it well in this poem. I've written several poems
    using properties of math, if you'd like you may read and comment on them. I'd be
    interested in your thoughts of them. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/19/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    Congratulations Suraj..Beautiful poem on Mathematics..Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (9/19/2013 12:57:00 AM)

    Great poem! Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,763 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (9/20/2012 12:09:00 AM)

    congrats on having this poem chosen as the Poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,763 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (9/20/2012 12:02:00 AM)

    Quite an interesting poem, well done...quite well measured, I must say, even the proportions of intensity of love vs waves of Niagara... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 79 Points Hunter Hunters (9/19/2012 5:44:00 AM)

    Hey, i can see the mathematics in you, the angles you used in the construction of words is clear, weldone. If u don't mine take a few minute of ur time and bisect my angle of poems(festus, the fluke, faith ect...) for me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 49 Points Anita Sehgal (9/19/2012 4:46:00 AM)

    very very interesting... amazing presentation! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,396 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (9/19/2012 2:16:00 AM)

    Fantastic idea of calculating abstract. Yes, mathematics can't reach the extreme, but it could put a valid proximity of attending what we should know by conscious....Nice experience of reading. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Indranil Bhaduri (9/19/2012 1:07:00 AM)

    Beautifully expressed in a very different way. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,763 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (4/12/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    Love and Maths do not always go together, but you have put it all so beautifully in a poem. Well done! Keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie tom mc quade (4/12/2009 10:34:00 AM)

    i 'doubled' over in delight when i read this poem.. :) tom (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (4/9/2009 10:58:00 PM)

    Hey,
    You are still studying, huh? College? Specialization? Math? Science?
    Anyways, you got all your equations and relations figured out.
    Very imaginative. Keep it up!

    Cheers.
    Subroto. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 101 Points Olugbenga Ayoola (4/4/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    i really like the away you organise your peomwith mathematic words God will renew your strenght in writing, you will get to your destination.in life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Don Mcwilliams (3/7/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    Suraj,

    What a delightfully unique paean to love. Perhaps everything in the universe can, indeed, be expalined mathematically. You have convinced me.

    Regards,
    Don (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lauren Watkins (9/2/2007 2:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful, almost makes me actually appreciate math! LW (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 2, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, September 5, 2011


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