Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A White Fall.


An overnight wonderland
Has coated my windowpane
Frostily, flakily white.

So rarely enjoyed in rain-
Sodden sea garden place
This soft flossy snow I lightly
Pace and experience before
Noonday thaw. A vast virgin
Blanket I must mark and stamp
With happy delight urging
To more, then bending, rolling
And gath'ring round heads I
Recall fond mem'ries with glee.
Tray-gliding, snowsliding, eyes
For white statue-men. This being
Ten again's appealing to me.!

Submitted: Tuesday, February 03, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, February 03, 2009

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  • Rookie - 110 Points Myrtle Thomas (4/5/2009 8:31:00 PM)

    Ah a new snow fall so beautiful but here in Indiana we have ever so much.This is a very nostalgic poem very delightful a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Robert Howard (2/14/2009 11:05:00 PM)

    Very enjoyable journey back to childhood's winter joys. Hold on a second, I'll get my sled. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points James Roberts (2/10/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    Reminds me of dylan thomas beautiful meteafors and really reminded me of winters past
    jim (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (2/7/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    Evocative, nostalgic and thoroughly worthwhile reading. A white, sparkling poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Robert Howard (2/3/2009 11:47:00 PM)

    This is lovely and fun. Hey, why stop at having a second childhood? I think we're entitled to a couple dozen at least, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (2/3/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    another beautiful write....i never have an experience with snow but while reading this marvellous write i alomst felt how it would feels....beautyful, beautiful....thanks 10+++
    rgds
    asif (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points C. P. Sharma (2/3/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    The joy of the beauty of snowfall runs all through this poem. Well penned.
    10+++++++
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (2/3/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    Beautifully described Fay....snow does have that effect on me too lol...thank you...Fi..10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (2/3/2009 6:24:00 AM)

    Yes! I can taste the snow from this.
    Have you ever taken a snowbath? If not PLEASE do! It is fantastic. You need no clothes and about two minutes of resolve.

    Your usual great writing.

    Best
    Hx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (2/3/2009 5:59:00 AM)

    Now I prefer to watch the snow from indoors! Lovely poem Fay, the snow looks beautiful,
    10
    Lynda xxx (Report) Reply

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