As I rise
through the ashes of life
I open my eyes
ready to fight
Look into my eyes
see no lies as I say
I can not be defeated
I will fight you
anyway you want me to
but beware I will defeat you
feel the power of positivity
running through my mind
I will defeat you
, , , positivity has an amazing power, , , , , so does your poem, , powerful write, , ,
I agree with Valsa ji, though it's not that easy but one can always hope for the best!
We have to wage an eternal battle to subdue negativity...! Bitter experiences tend to make us pessimistic.... but through fighting spirit and indefatigable will, we have to overpower our enemy and become positive! A fine write! !
power of positivity - great feeling, I like it. Please read my new poems and comment.
That attitude should carry you far. The power of positive thinking, well defined is this brief and to the point write.Positively great
Positive feeling brings success. Beautiful lines of verse. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great message here Dave - it is all too easy to fall into negativity when life gets tough, and this is an excellent spur to us all that we can rise above it. Well said and well written. Hope your friend takes it on board.