Beach Girl


Crazy - Poem by Beach Girl

I don’t know, I don’t know
Maybe I’m crazy
I could feel, I could taste
Salty sea spray
When I awoke, I could hear
And see the blue

I heard the gulls, cry overhead
The sky was hazy
Like drums my heart, beat in my chest
I felt afraid
Was this a dream, or just me
My mind askew?


Comments about Crazy by Beach Girl

  • Gold Star - 12,394 Points Bri Edwards (3/14/2015 5:40:00 PM)

    iip's comment was certainly interesting! i hope his interpretation was not accurate.
    i guess it depends on what your surroundings were, as to whether or not you were crazy.
    My guess, though, is YES! , U were crazy. just kidding. of course it may not be YOU in the poem. fantasy?

    interesting rhyme pattern and alternating length of lines. nice. bri :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 13,226 Points Amitava Sur (7/7/2014 8:49:00 PM)

    Feeling crazy means you are in full of life. you are living the life with it's excitements.since you love the sea, it's beauty you are hallucinated with it..... liked it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,307 Points Patricia Grantham (9/19/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    When we love something so much our minds
    conjures up past experiences that It seems like
    we are reliving it all over again. The beautiful beach
    with its azure skies and clear water are enticing.
    Yo go girl! Nice and enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Kevin East (8/14/2013 6:56:00 AM)

    Lovely, like it well done, keep writing... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,955 Points Tiku . (8/13/2013 12:26:00 PM)

    very nice.style and concept is beautiful.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,825 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/13/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    You seem to have an obsession with sea. So these feelings are not crazy but natural. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Indranil Bhaduri (8/13/2013 6:34:00 AM)

    Very nicely written. Keep going (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,109 Points Heather Wilkins (8/12/2013 12:03:00 PM)

    lots of time I feel rather crazy but I regroup. good write life makes us that way (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,606 Points Is It Poetry (6/22/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    It sounds like,
    a dead body climbed on top of you.
    Temporary paralysis to me.....iip (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, February 7, 2014


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