Enemies May Be Friends Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Enemies May Be Friends

Rating: 5.0


It's too dark,
I think I should lit a new candle,
but I have only one candle in my bag.
Irony of fate!
The match box, too, has only one stick.
I am moving in a dense forest.
Snakes and other poisonous reptiles
are flowing in the water
Difficult to walk in sticky mud
the boots have become too heavy.
Mud stuck with the boots
has made every step a tiring fatigue.
I don't think the rains will ever stop!
The wind is blowing with all its might,
If I try to lit the candle the match stick may extinguish
even if I succeed to lit the candle
shall it survive in the violent blows of the winds?
Oh rains!
Oh lightning!
Oh thunder!
Oh mud!
Oh darkness!
Oh wind!
You all are my worst enemies!
Having lost my way in a dense forest
I don't know whether I shall find my way again
or buried in a swamp without any funerals.

Is it only me who is afraid of the winds?
I think dark clouds are also afraid of the winds.
I see the clouds are now running away.
What a pleasure to see a glimpse of the moon!
Clouds defeated by the shining stars
but the scattered and defeated clouds
sometimes look backwards
like a defeated wrestler
and use abusive language for the victorious rival.

Lightning now showing the reptiles
thunders warning to beware of the swamp
darkness making the moon and stars more bright
and guiding to the highway
mud making difficult for the reptiles to attack.
Everyone who were my worst enemies a short while ago
look now changed in helpful friends.

I have found my way,
There is the highway
shining like the Milky Way
in the moonlight.
The wind blows are now back in their barracks
Bravo!
The victorious army of the winds!

I am on the highway
I lit the last candle
hoping before it's exhausted
someone will lift me up
and
will carry me to the nearby town.

Friday, October 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friends,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 09 October 2017

Beautifully written! It is a nice experience to have enemies turned into friends! I could feel your ordeal through the swamp and the dark forest! But at the end you could come out of all nerve wracking experiences like a victor! A 10

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

Wonderful poem Akhtar.. You have Lighted a candle in our hearts

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Khalid Saifullah 07 October 2017

What a thoughtful metaphor, yes whom I think are our enemies may be friends in fact.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

It's too dark, . In this darkness we need light. You think wise here and you should light a new candle. Light of wisdom will motivate mind and give realization about life. Love and wisdom help to overcome obstacles. Everyone who have acted as your worst enemies a short while ago have changed in helpful friends. Love has transformed them by grace of God. Moonlight sprinkles light of calmness and happiness here. A brilliant perceptional poem is excellently penned...10

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