Lane Of Verdant Elixirs (Being Inspired By Savita Tyagi’s Poem Journey Of Life) Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Lane Of Verdant Elixirs (Being Inspired By Savita Tyagi’s Poem Journey Of Life)
The train is stopped on the outer signal,
Waiting for the green light,
The journey is about to end,
I am afraid to be checked and fined,
On the last station,
Travelling without a ticket,
I have no money to pay the fine,
Let me leave the train,
I see a narrow passage,
In the grassy land,
Colorful and aromatic,
I put off my shoes,
I throw my stockings,
The green carpet,
When kisses my feet,
I put off whatever I found,
On the clay model,
I slow down,
The touch is pleasant.
It has started raining,
The fine mild rain,
And the broken clouds,
And the sun peeping out,
From the clouds,
The wind is teasing,
The clouds like a teen aged virgin,
Sometimes smile,
And sometimes cry,
I see the dance of the lovely maid,
Changing her shapes,
By changing costumes,
The passion of sun,
Penetrating droplets,
And diverged in a lovely rainbow,
A multicolored signal,
From the beloved,
Come-on my lover,
Your love is your ticket,
Who can stop you?
Who can check and fine,
I am standing on the doors,
With my thirsty eyes,
And a restless soul,
Broken sometimes ago,
In an accident,
The piece in you,
Travelling on highways,
Always ignored,
This narrow pavement,
Lane of Verdant Elixirs!
The piece in you, Travelling on highways, Always ignored, This narrow pavement, Lane of Verdant Elixirs! A beautiful poem.........................10
This is just lovely...... lovely like the verdant stretch of land with the rainbow tying both its ends like a band of multicolored ribbon as shown in the picture you have attached! Enjoyed!
Wow amazing poem! 'The piece in you traveling on highway always ignored....' The rush of life ignores the lane of Verdant elixirs. Just beautiful! thank you Akhtarji loved this poem so much. A 10. Thanks for sharing. By the way it's your heart that inspires you but thank you so much any way for mentioning my little poem.
Nature has its own beauty..beautifully expressed..thanks for sharing..
Read this poem after a long time again. Fresh and beautiful as ever.
Travelling on highways, Always ignored, This narrow pavement, Lane of Verdant Elixirs! Beautiful I enjoyed the way it flowed.
I love this outstanding write with imagery so moving and vivid, that flows with your gift of writing from your heart!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wow... Amazing one..10 on 10