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(27 May 1980)

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Last Kisses for Last Love

lips by lips
breath by breath
here we meet
let's forget the rest
i hug you closer
your hand in my shoulder
fondle my frozen-skin
burning every single inch
our tongues make a sign
our heartbeat write the rhyme
for a second, i mute the time
wander to your deepest mind
hope this moment last longer
no matter if we wake-up the world anger
i'll be stronger, i'll be better
as long as we stay together, forever
until the death come for sure...

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Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 02, 2013


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  • Queeny Gona (8/24/2013 8:23:00 AM)

    Great composing dear Adheez.


    no matter if we wake-up the world anger
    i'll be stronger, i'll be better
    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure...

    Beautiful lines!

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  • George Price (8/16/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    I love the pace and meter in this; it goes from a slow, steady beat to something faster and yet still steady, somehow. Just like a quickening heartbeat. Wonderful.

    Please do feel free to take a look at some of my writing.

  • Shereen Ramadan (8/14/2013 9:20:00 AM)

    woooow: D perfect
    i liked your rhyming in this poem very much.

  • Alookh (matin) (8/14/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    perfect adheez! i enjoyed :)

  • Emily Angel (8/13/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    Quite beautiful and passionate poems. And forever is what we all wish for.

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/12/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    A nice poem expressing passionate feelings!

  • Vera Sidhwa (8/10/2013 5:06:00 PM)

    The rhyming in your poem, and the depth of expression is awesome. Keep up the good write.

  • Rose Lu (8/9/2013 5:35:00 PM)

    no matter if we wake-up the world anger
    i'll be stronger, i'll be better
    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure...

    Very Good!

  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (8/8/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    Well written poem adheez, really enjoyed reading it.
    Siya_! !

  • Wala' Qamhieh (8/7/2013 9:45:00 AM)

    I like it.. good one =) Keep writing

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