Treasure Island

adheez van der beanthz

(27 May 1980)

Last Kisses for Last Love


lips by lips
breath by breath
here we meet
let's forget the rest
i hug you closer
your hand in my shoulder
fondle my frozen-skin
burning every single inch
our tongues make a sign
our heartbeat write the rhyme
for a second, i mute the time
wander to your deepest mind
hope this moment last longer
no matter if we wake-up the world anger
i'll be stronger, i'll be better
as long as we stay together, forever
until the death come for sure...

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Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 02, 2013

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  • Queeny Gona (8/24/2013 8:23:00 AM)

    Great composing dear Adheez.


    no matter if we wake-up the world anger
    i'll be stronger, i'll be better
    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure...

    Beautiful lines! (Report) Reply

  • George Price (8/16/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    I love the pace and meter in this; it goes from a slow, steady beat to something faster and yet still steady, somehow. Just like a quickening heartbeat. Wonderful.

    Please do feel free to take a look at some of my writing. (Report) Reply

  • Vera Sidhwa (8/10/2013 5:06:00 PM)

    The rhyming in your poem, and the depth of expression is awesome. Keep up the good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rose Lu (8/9/2013 5:35:00 PM)

    no matter if we wake-up the world anger
    i'll be stronger, i'll be better
    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure...

    Very Good! (Report) Reply

  • Zandile Zoya (8/6/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    i 'll be stronger, i 'll be better
    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure...#enough said (Report) Reply

  • Josephine Alexis-hagues (8/5/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    I loved this! ..it flows beautifully with passion and determination. Thank you for providing my very first comment on P H, much appreciated. (Report) Reply

  • Ankur Thakur (7/30/2013 6:49:00 PM)

    Don't make this the 'last kiss' please...

    We want more such poems to be written by you...

    Wonderful sir...i really enjoyed this...
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Payal Parande (7/30/2013 11:37:00 AM)

    Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
    so beautiful sir...... (Report) Reply

  • Anamika Jalan (7/30/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    Classical thinkers employed classification as a way to define and assess the quality of poetry. Notably, the existing fragments of Aristotle's Poetics describe three genres of poetry—the epic, the comic, and the tragic—and develop rules to distinguish the highest-quality poetry in each genre, based on the underlying purposes of the genre.[15] Later aestheticians identified three major genres: epic poetry, lyric poetry, and dramatic poetry, treating comedy and tragedy as subgenres of dramatic poetry.[16]

    Aristotle's work was influential throughout the Middle East during the Islamic Golden Age, [17] as well as in Europe during the Renaissance.[18] Later poets and aestheticians often distinguished poetry from, and defined it in opposition to prose, which was generally understood as writing with a proclivity to logical explication and a linear narrative structure.[19] (Report) Reply

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