adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

Last Kisses For Last Love - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

lips by lips
breath by breath
here we meet
let's forget the rest
i hug you closer
your hand in my shoulder
fondle my frozen-skin
burning every single inch
our tongues make a sign
our heartbeat write the rhyme
for a second, i mute the time
wander to your deepest mind
hope this moment last longer
no matter if we wake-up the world anger
i'll be stronger, i'll be better
as long as we stay together, forever
until the death come for sure...

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Comments about Last Kisses For Last Love by adheez van der beanthz

  • Rookie - 338 Points Queeny Gona (8/24/2013 8:23:00 AM)

    Great composing dear Adheez.


    no matter if we wake-up the world anger
    i'll be stronger, i'll be better
    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure...

    Beautiful lines! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie George Price (8/16/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    I love the pace and meter in this; it goes from a slow, steady beat to something faster and yet still steady, somehow. Just like a quickening heartbeat. Wonderful.

    Please do feel free to take a look at some of my writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shereen Ramadan (8/14/2013 9:20:00 AM)

    woooow: D perfect
    i liked your rhyming in this poem very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (8/14/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    perfect adheez! i enjoyed :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Emily Angel (8/13/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    Quite beautiful and passionate poems. And forever is what we all wish for. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/12/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    A nice poem expressing passionate feelings! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,141 Points Vera Sidhwa (8/10/2013 5:06:00 PM)

    The rhyming in your poem, and the depth of expression is awesome. Keep up the good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 215 Points Rose Lu (8/9/2013 5:35:00 PM)

    no matter if we wake-up the world anger
    i'll be stronger, i'll be better
    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure...

    Very Good! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 205 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (8/8/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    Well written poem adheez, really enjoyed reading it.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 291 Points Wala' Qamhieh (8/7/2013 9:45:00 AM)

    I like it.. good one =) Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zandile Zoya (8/6/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    i 'll be stronger, i 'll be better
    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure...#enough said (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Josephine Alexis-hagues (8/5/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    I loved this! ..it flows beautifully with passion and determination. Thank you for providing my very first comment on P H, much appreciated. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Matt Mooney (8/3/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    Intimate love expressed in scintillating language.10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kharon March (7/31/2013 7:16:00 PM)

    Good write lol enjoyed the love this poem emits (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (7/31/2013 1:04:00 AM)

    for a seconds, i mute the time
    wish if we can do that so the lovely moment will never end, well write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,882 Points Heather Wilkins (7/30/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    true love lasts forever. till eeath do we part. lovely thoughts (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,144 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2013 7:06:00 PM)

    as long as we stay together, forever
    until the death come for sure..... good belonging dream nice poem...10, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ankur Thakur (7/30/2013 6:49:00 PM)

    Don't make this the 'last kiss' please...

    We want more such poems to be written by you...

    Wonderful sir...i really enjoyed this...
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/30/2013 11:37:00 AM)

    Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
    so beautiful sir...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (7/30/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    Classical thinkers employed classification as a way to define and assess the quality of poetry. Notably, the existing fragments of Aristotle's Poetics describe three genres of poetry—the epic, the comic, and the tragic—and develop rules to distinguish the highest-quality poetry in each genre, based on the underlying purposes of the genre.[15] Later aestheticians identified three major genres: epic poetry, lyric poetry, and dramatic poetry, treating comedy and tragedy as subgenres of dramatic poetry.[16]

    Aristotle's work was influential throughout the Middle East during the Islamic Golden Age, [17] as well as in Europe during the Renaissance.[18] Later poets and aestheticians often distinguished poetry from, and defined it in opposition to prose, which was generally understood as writing with a proclivity to logical explication and a linear narrative structure.[19] (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 2, 2013


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