adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

Lost - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Sunk in the misguided of the deep sea
Trapped amongst the darkness wave
Whilst the sun denies the morning
And memories come back, despite had been eaten by flame

Sand bodies sprawling
Feelings heathen more sparkling
Grin of sweat so jealous
Racing, hunting, and raping the longing that ambiguous

Gust of sigh map the wounds
Pink body wallow bloods
Summarized then furled
To the ballads that never enough

The wind negotiate, the fog give applause
Drag the black into the boat
Don't know the directions, no more ray
The rest just sins, the which left only prayer

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Comments about Lost by adheez van der beanthz

  • Rookie - 287 Points marvin brato (9/24/2013 11:42:00 PM)

    Great imaginary, describes the realm of what life is made! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (8/28/2013 6:53:00 AM)

    wonderfully animated abstractions...a lively poem with a fine imagery! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 323 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/27/2013 9:36:00 AM)

    Thinking on your poem like a advice maybe i need be careful with my boat. No darkness no lost in the middle of the sea. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 936 Points Queeny Gona (8/27/2013 5:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful Imagery with wonderful ending. Voted 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,456 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (8/24/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    Portrays anxiety well. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,023 Points Hazel Durham (8/23/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    Amazing imagery rhat sweeps the reader along on a journey well worth taking!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,609 Points Kevin Patrick (8/19/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    Very song like, there is a sweetness that is not to saccharine, you paint a lovely scene of nature, you might have been lost, but I have found a delight in the journey you took me on. Than you a lot! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (8/18/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    Theme which u have chosen, its awesome..
    magnificent in nature is ur poem
    especially selection of diction is bombastic..
    lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Luciana Isabelle (8/17/2013 12:02:00 PM)

    wonderfully written..... love it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sabrina Niday Hansel (8/17/2013 12:47:00 AM)

    That was very lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/16/2013 4:50:00 AM)

    If you drag the black back into the boat will it help row. Has it sails to take us far beyond our dreams?
    Or is it full of water that fills the boat dangerously to the sinking point.
    And lost on a sea of sin with the cell phone out and only have prayer connection showing no bars?
    Indeed one is lost, so lost. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (8/15/2013 10:55:00 PM)

    a lovely poem.don't know the directions no more ray the rest just sins the which left only prayer. good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Jemima Rivas (8/15/2013 3:23:00 PM)

    beautiful work thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shereen Ramadan (8/15/2013 2:47:00 PM)

    your images are really amazing. keep it up: D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arnav Gogoi (8/15/2013 11:28:00 AM)

    The wind negotiate, the fog give applause...nice expression...when darkness empowers you with its arms, the only light you can see is a prayer....Nice write friend (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/15/2013 10:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem...misguided, trapped, denied, lack of directions, no ray of hope..only prayer...All the words are beautifully portrayed...Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 98 Points Vivek Tiwari (8/15/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    A day comes when the day comes and all the hurdles black and dusty are swept aside and the light welcomes the dawn and things are again in all visibility. Lofty theme empowered..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/15/2013 6:28:00 AM)

    Well, this is a lovely write. kind of nice imagination that can happen in reality. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 15, 2013


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