Soulmate Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Soulmate

Rating: 4.6


when I slept
I found your shadow in the verses
translated a whole alphabets
from the beats of soul that tempestuous

then I dreamed
we talked to the heart
interpreted a bunch of emotions
amongst the poem petals

when I woke up
your shadow lost in somewhere
left a form of punctuation
from the love's rune that i couldn't guess

in daydream I thought to myself
followed the rhyme that you summarized
in the line of longing, in the row of doubt
split a heart, crossed a time

only to the words I spoke to my mind
fondle hope, kiss love
in every script I entrust prayer
for you soulmate; anywhere


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 03 December 2013

a nice write about the soul mate. to be so luck to find this special person in this life would be wonderful

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 December 2013

Wow an excellent poetic piece, punctuated with love in swell grammar usage. Tc.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 December 2013

so sweet and gentle, it's like floating in the wind truly a beautiful verse. Lovely

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Msforever Lonley 04 December 2013

i love this poem soo much.. i wish someone would feel like that for me

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Hazel Durham 05 December 2013

So original with beautiful imagery with depth as deep as the ocean, moving with the waves of desire and emotion! Superb write!

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Mohammad Skati 19 May 2015

A wonderful poem. I loved it. Thanks.

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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2015

A well articulated and nicely penned love poem that captures the bliss of love in the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Valsa George 25 March 2014

in every script I entrust prayer for you soulmate; anywhere Day in and day out, when you are surrounded by thoughts of your soulmate, what more can you give to your soulmate other than your loving and heart felt prayers? A very passionate write Adheez!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 25 March 2014

Lovely piece.

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Susan Lacovara 04 March 2014

The stitching together of soulmates, woven with the finest of threads. The precision of your pen brings to life the beautiful connection. Wonderful! PEACE

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