An Ode Of River Rhyme Poem by adheez van der beanthz

An Ode Of River Rhyme

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The mountains
that paint Terra's face
too arrogant to share diction
The sea
that blanketed by rainbow
so haughty to translated languages
Only river so faithful
sow the word seeds
pick the script verses
then harvest it into a love poem
that inscribed on the cloud body
entrusted to the horizon soul
till the wind deliver it
To you..
my magnificent longing

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erin Stevens 22 December 2013

This is so sweet and lovely!

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Patricia Grantham 23 December 2013

Very nicely written with good details. Nature expressed in such a lovely way. Just like love flowing from the rivers and bursting with such beauty. Enjoyed. Keep on penning with power.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 23 December 2013

Only river so faithful sow the word seeds pick the script verses then harvest it into a love poem....... though the look is restricted by window, yet, it illustrates the purposeful view to show the reader a part of life, in other parts river carries many things....many...many.... Well written.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 24 December 2013

Truly a lovely write, full of emotions and imagery. Enjoyed reading this verse. So beautiful....

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Mohammed Albalushi 24 December 2013

full of love and emotion, well write

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Prasanna Kumari 02 April 2014

good poem with unique expression bringing unique thought....

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2014

Stunning imagery and so beautifully expressed!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 March 2014

Wow wind dispersal of poetry, thanx to dear ol poemhunter to convey great poems like this. Imaginative. Tc.

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Jemima Rivas 18 March 2014

very smooth it glides love it :)

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Bing Hua 18 February 2014

Good poem. I like it

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