Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Sun And Moon - Poem by Aftab Alam

The bright sun, handsome and smart,
Moon is madly love with him, an art,
When sun hid in the darkness; in lap,
She comes with her brightness; flip flop

Stars always with coy criticizing


Comments about Sun And Moon by Aftab Alam

  • Freshman - 585 Points Silvi Tripathy (8/24/2014 12:30:00 PM)

    A short and sweet poem. I liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 585 Points Silvi Tripathy (8/24/2014 12:29:00 PM)

    short and sweet. i liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,318 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/24/2014 2:56:00 AM)

    A nice idea, a lovely write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 24, 2014



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