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The flower which stimulates
The color what intoxicates,
Attracts two loving souls –
Too close to make intimate.
The tipsy mind floats around
With it's maddening fragrance..
It forcibly pulls one
Into the lovers’ maiden den.
You - the hypnotic killer...
My loved rose with blue color,
Instigating to be lustful with your -
Charms and your valour.
You mesmerize, you hypnotize one -
To become lascivious with your bewitching grace.
My loved rose with blue color -
Love your mischief, I love your flair.
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Amitava (22.7.2013)
The colour blue what a rose of love with its hypnotic draw ' love your mischief, I love your flair.' just great...regards
I really adored this lovely lilting poem about a blue rose. They come in all kinds of colors. Red, pink, yellow, etc. A rose in blue means I love you. A touching write Amitava. Your poetry melts the heart.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! No, Amitava, I've not read this poem before, didn't realize you'd written one about the blue rose. It's pretty dramatic imagery. Not at all like my blue roses of heaven, but good just the same. Bet you're laughing at me now aren't you? It's quite a stretch between your blue rose and mine. Score 10 for you.