Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 137 Points (9 may / India)

.the Moon Up There.. - Poem by Rigzin Namgyal

..do ' you ' see the moon up there...
..why do ' you ' see only a half of it...
..when it is so round and beautiful..
..the same way...my dear....there are many other things..
..upon which ' you ' laugh and make fun..
..because ' your ' naked eyes cannot see them..

..bask in the beauty of the moon up there..my dear..
..why do ' you ' see only a half of it.. :) ;)


Comments about .the Moon Up There.. by Rigzin Namgyal

  • Gold Star - 4,650 Points Patricia Grantham (10/5/2013 10:34:00 PM)

    The moon is still the moon whether it is half or full. It's
    beauty is never limited to what you may or may not see.
    it is also vital to our existence. Nice. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (10/12/2012 4:39:00 AM)

    So nice. Two lovers must see the whole, not half. Great! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (12/29/2011 4:12:00 AM)

    The dark side of the moon... There is light and darkness in each of us. But like a beautiful full moon, we can all reach our full potensial. A great poem you've written here... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 31, 2011



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