DOLDRUMS
Mind, empty of music
On a lonesome beach
Beside a soundless sea
LOST LOVE
Once I saw rainbows in the sky
Once I caught the melody in the wind
Now only the cloud laden sky and a jar in my ears
Once I saw rainbows in the sky Once I caught the melody in the wind I like thsese two lines, , , , very beautiful! ! ! Top marksss! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The great debut of love to life Once I saw rainbows in the sky Once I caught the melody in the wind Now only the cloud laden sky and a jar in my ears
Short simple and touching feel sad but enjoyed reading as the poetess enjoyed writing.
Once I saw rainbows in the sky Once I caught the melody in the wind Now only the cloud laden sky and a jar in my ears. ... once it was but it is not now....this is the lost love. Beautifully put. Five stars.
Being in the state of doldrum could be so relaxing only if we are not hit by the downward state described in the second triplet. A marvelous composition.
A beautiful twin triplets dear madam! I find great poetic beauty in your your poetry! Loved reading this fabulous short work....10
In doldrums mind feels emptiness of music. Rainbow of love disappears when there is lamentations in life. Beautifully inscribed. Thanks for sharing.
When our love is with us every thing appears beautiful and when our love is not with us the entire beauty is vanished. Not only thinking our entire behavior depends on our happiness and sadness. A lovely write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow pure melancholy that takes minds away to a lonsome haven adorns only by wrekage ship after a devistating storm.... in few words you gracefully embebed all the melody of lost love.... inspired penning...