Now my hopes are like Night-jasmine!
Do you know for sure what I mean?
They bloom at night and fall in the morning
They look so nice but they are short-living!
Now my life is like a dead rose plant -
It wants flower but God doesn’t grant!
I believe firmly God is the Most Kind
But I can’t understand what’s in His mind!
Beautiful flow of words and in unison with God they are really the most exquisite with the choicest poetry..
Great poem... Love and care for us are the things in God's mind... But he will grant you at the right time. We need to wait for His blessings..well written my brother.. top marks!
What's in God's mind, allowing me to fade out like a dead rose, i do ask him same question, this is a motivating lines, thanks
Really like this. I know what you mean. Sometimes it makes you wonder what god As got in store for us. I really like this. May i invite you to read my new poem Called, sands of time.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That is true and good choice of poem you written and I like the last two lines of poem.