when, i first saw u in the garden,
caressing those cheeks of yours with a red hibiscus,
the world stopped......
leaving just the two of us....
...
you mean a lot to me
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like a lone solitary kite, ,
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uff ye'mehangai'
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Thursday, April 1,2010 at 7: 01pm | Edit Note | Delete
As I get up from my slumber in the morning, ,
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i want to be sachin tendulkar,
just to feel,
how its like making millions happy,
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As I sit down and write about what i just saw,
i cant help but ponder on, the wonder called man,
loud music reverberates around,
music which makes you go mad,
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student... a poet by heart... i leave the logic behind, , , when i write, , , emotions dominate and the pen starts moving by itself...)
Ode To An Unknown Sweetheart
when, i first saw u in the garden,
caressing those cheeks of yours with a red hibiscus,
the world stopped......
leaving just the two of us....
as i gazed at u, ,
ur surreal beauty,
so charming, so serene,
enchantalised me, , , , ,
i knew that u were my destiny,
i knew my fate had your name etched across,
i just dont know what instigated me,
probably the picturesque surroundings,
probably the hibiscus,
i am blissfully unaware of it,
the one thing i know is that u my Goddess
will be my wife,
and i'll free your encaptured soul.
which is restricted by the handicap you suffer from,
i'd let go of all ur inhibitions,
and your soul will fly undettered,
to touch the horizons, ,
to realize the dreams you've piled up in your heart,
YOUR BLINDNESS WOULDNT MATTER NOW,
COZ YOU WILL SEE THE WORLD WITH MY EYES,
TOUCH AND FEEL THE EUPHORIA AROUND, , , , ,
joys that were alien to u will now be urs
forever.........
well done baccha..........a nice composition which actually reflects something..........10