You left me alone and scarred
My heart in pieces
One in one million
But that's ok
...
The worth is not of thy neighbor's
Said the devil
Flames embraced the soundless
This is your atonement
...
Stays there the fire, still
Not fully extinguished
With the seams of the past
Ebbed into my skin,
...
There is no emotion here
I flushed it all away
Like feces,
I say, I flushed it all away
...
I write through my character's POV. Looking professional advice; critique. I mainly do these to vent.)
Ache
You left me alone and scarred
My heart in pieces
One in one million
But that's ok
I have some glue
And more love for you
No
Just hate
No
Neither,
Only slight heartache