Elsa Bear

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Elsa Bear Poems

1. Mushy Rice 5/28/2005
2. I Wish 10/8/2004
3. Love Song 6/15/2005
4. How Was Your Day? 9/5/2005
5. Courage 5/14/2005
6. You And She 5/14/2005
7. Ooh Shoobee Doobee Ooh 5/21/2005
8. Tragedy 5/14/2005
9. Writing 6/23/2005
10. Final Honesty (Believe Me You Haven'T Wanted To Hear This As Much As You Thought) 6/21/2005
11. I Teach Myself 12/29/2005
12. Dark Cloud 9/5/2005
13. A Spotless Mind 6/20/2005
14. The Obligatory Mushy One 5/17/2005
15. Jumbled Verses In My Head 6/13/2005
16. He 6/15/2005
17. Morning 5/20/2005
18. Too Many Movies 5/21/2005
19. The Infinite Abyss 6/20/2005
20. Rockin' Party 6/20/2005
21. Ode To A Tashi 7/30/2005
22. Dreams 3/12/2005
23. Falling 3/28/2005
24. Ode To Jammy 10/6/2005
25. Grasping 11/1/2005
26. Untitled And Unfinished 11/4/2005
27. History 11/28/2004
28. Sleeping 11/15/2006
29. Rainfall 11/7/2008
30. Listen 3/16/2009
31. Poem From Bed 1/7/2010
32. Lonely Waters 5/28/2005
33. Narrowminded Ego 5/28/2005
34. Graham And Elsa 5/28/2005
35. Q & A 5/28/2005
36. I Got You Babe 5/28/2005
37. Baring All 6/5/2005
38. Hold Me In The Morning 8/29/2005
39. Tsunami 9/22/2010
40. Forgotten Friends....Again 12/3/2010

Comments about Elsa Bear

  • Rufina Moor (8/29/2005 4:34:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed it. it's very nice and it flows well. light but deep at the same time :)
    Thanks. Nico

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  • Elsa Brooks (5/28/2005 8:00:00 PM)

    *blush*

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  • earyt etr (5/27/2005 8:05:00 AM)

    Elsa, first off, wow.You are a poet. Most people who write poetry just find clever ways to rhyme words together, and slap a title on it.Others, true poets, write from the heart, and that is what I consider poetry. The rest? Well, thats what I call Glorified Commercial Slogans. Keep writing, you inspire us all.

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  • Iskandr Kreepor (5/25/2005 11:18:00 AM)

    I love your work. I especially like your poem named Manufactured. I can relate to that one. Keep writing. Reading your work is something I look forward to. ^-^

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  • James Wright (2/10/2005 1:03:00 PM)

    Hehe 'comes with maturity' I kill me.

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  • dissatified exmember (1/28/2005 4:02:00 PM)

    Elsa Honey
    NEVER be scared of what people say. It's good to hear it. It helps, even when you don't think it does. This IS a public site and your work IS good enough to read. You did say you were writing from experience and its your life you are telling us all about. Well when you share your life with people, you have to expect them to say stuff. Often things we don't like. Also remember if you are telling people about yourself you do have to watch how you say it. Just in case they get the wrong impression. Don't take it on, and continuee to be yourself. Just take advice from Poet Hound. He has some good advice to give.

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  • Elsa Brooks (12/27/2004 4:51:00 PM)

    if only i knew how to delet comments

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Best Poem of Elsa Bear

Her Choice, Her Punishment

a product of misery
she barely survived her childhood.
living on the verge of a breakdown
it takes all her energy not to cry everyday.
2am christmas morning she allows herself to cry gently.
2pm shes all on her own.
HER choice
HER heartbreak
HER private pain
HER private punishment.
she doesn't deserve happiness,
or completeness, or contentment.
self destructive, cynical, lonely, bitter.
they describe her perfectly.
guilty.
it eats her up inside.
she's let so many people down
her pride gets in the way
her stubborness blinds her.
she's ...

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Mushy Rice

what did he just say?
did he just say he loves me?
i almost choke on my muller rice.
it goes all over my chin and my jumper.
i freak.
does he expect me to say it back?
of course i love him.
why wouldn't i?
but can i say it?