Elsa Bear

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  • Rufina Moor (8/29/2005 4:34:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed it. it's very nice and it flows well. light but deep at the same time :)
    Thanks. Nico

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  • Elsa Brooks (5/28/2005 8:00:00 PM)

    *blush*

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  • earyt etr (5/27/2005 8:05:00 AM)

    Elsa, first off, wow.You are a poet. Most people who write poetry just find clever ways to rhyme words together, and slap a title on it.Others, true poets, write from the heart, and that is what I consider poetry. The rest? Well, thats what I call Glorified Commercial Slogans. Keep writing, you inspire us all.

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  • Iskandr Kreepor (5/25/2005 11:18:00 AM)

    I love your work. I especially like your poem named Manufactured. I can relate to that one. Keep writing. Reading your work is something I look forward to. ^-^

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  • James Wright (2/10/2005 1:03:00 PM)

    Hehe 'comes with maturity' I kill me.

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  • dissatified exmember (1/28/2005 4:02:00 PM)

    Elsa Honey
    NEVER be scared of what people say. It's good to hear it. It helps, even when you don't think it does. This IS a public site and your work IS good enough to read. You did say you were writing from experience and its your life you are telling us all about. Well when you share your life with people, you have to expect them to say stuff. Often things we don't like. Also remember if you are telling people about yourself you do have to watch how you say it. Just in case they get the wrong impression. Don't take it on, and continuee to be yourself. Just take advice from Poet Hound. He has some good advice to give.

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  • Elsa Brooks (12/27/2004 4:51:00 PM)

    if only i knew how to delet comments

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Best Poem of Elsa Bear

Broken

you always promised me that things wouldn't change
and that youd love me all the same
youd be there for me when i was happy or sad
youd wipe away every tear that i cried
and i believed you
for all those promises were worth i belived youd keep them
every broken promise was another bitter tear
trailing miserably down my pale cheek
sometimes i believed that promises were made to be broken
but hearts, like childhood dreams were not
photographs torn to shreds
left like shattered truths
the ruins of what was onece viewed as a perfect childhood lay stretched out ...

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