Elsa Bear

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1.
Confusion
through the mist
and all the confusion
i see him.
he's running towards me
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2.
Her Choice, Her Punishment
a product of misery
she barely survived her childhood.
living on the verge of a breakdown
it takes all her energy not to cry everyday.
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3.
Broken
you always promised me that things wouldn't change
and that youd love me all the same
youd be there for me when i was happy or sad
youd wipe away every tear that i cried
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4.
My Life
i want to be loved
i want to be held.
i want to feel good
and i want to do well.
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5.
Dancing Dreams
blank pages stare back at her
a book full of them
feeling uninspired she sits by her window sill
staring at the trees, the houses, the passersby.
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Rufina Moor 29 August 2005
I really enjoyed it. it's very nice and it flows well. light but deep at the same time :) Thanks. Nico
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Elsa Brooks 28 May 2005
*blush*
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earyt etr 27 May 2005
Elsa, first off, wow.You are a poet. Most people who write poetry just find clever ways to rhyme words together, and slap a title on it.Others, true poets, write from the heart, and that is what I consider poetry. The rest? Well, thats what I call Glorified Commercial Slogans. Keep writing, you inspire us all.
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Iskandr Kreepor 25 May 2005
I love your work. I especially like your poem named Manufactured. I can relate to that one. Keep writing. Reading your work is something I look forward to. ^-^
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James Wright 10 February 2005
Hehe 'comes with maturity' I kill me.
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dissatified exmember 28 January 2005
Elsa Honey NEVER be scared of what people say. It's good to hear it. It helps, even when you don't think it does. This IS a public site and your work IS good enough to read. You did say you were writing from experience and its your life you are telling us all about. Well when you share your life with people, you have to expect them to say stuff. Often things we don't like. Also remember if you are telling people about yourself you do have to watch how you say it. Just in case they get the wrong impression. Don't take it on, and continuee to be yourself. Just take advice from Poet Hound. He has some good advice to give.
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Elsa Brooks 27 December 2004
if only i knew how to delet comments
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