i've been writing poems since the age of 10/11. Over the last few years ive used poetry as a way to vent my anger and depression.
It would be much appreciated if you would comment my poems.
god saw you were getting tired and a cure was not to be;
so he put his arm around you and whispered ' come with me '
with tearful eyes we saw you, watched you pass away
even though we loved you dearly, we couldn't make you stay
...
through the pain of memories;
through the rainbow light of the darkness
another day beckons.
through a thousand morning mists;
...
Another tear;
streams down my burning face.
The world and life around me;
has no meaning.
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this will be the last time i take it;
seconds tick by
the world outside of me,
outside my thoughts.
...