GoodGuy Lost Poems

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*it is a work in progress*

the maddening pace of my thoughts
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id really iove it if ppl would comment on my poems.: i know this one isnt very good, but it just felt right when i wrote it so, here it is....

can angels see demons?
can they see what i have done?
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im losing my mind, trying to hide
who cares who sees my darker side?
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im losing my mind, trying to hide
who cares who sees my darker side?
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my demons are hungry,
they seek my soul.
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*just alittle poem i thought of this morning: please comment, i enjoy any feedback, good or bad.*

i awoke six months ago, melancholy as always,
i was feeling pissed, because my heart was ablaze
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