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the maddening pace of my thoughts
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can angels see demons?
can they see what i have done?
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im losing my mind, trying to hide
who cares who sees my darker side?
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im losing my mind, trying to hide
who cares who sees my darker side?
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my demons are hungry,
they seek my soul.
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im just a kid, but i got lots on my mind, i cant stop thinking, ever, and im more intelligent or deeper than my peers on average... i dont mean to sound conceited though. im sorry if i do, its just the way i feel sometimes.)
A Song About Losing Yourself....
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the maddening pace of my thoughts
makes me want to scream.
i dont really know what i want now,
i dont know what it means.
cuz iam here alone now,
and once again my mind,
is blazing with that fire,
the one and only kind.
the kind that burns all my thoughts,
into my memory,
the kind that burns with passion,
until i cannot breathe....
i cannot remember,
what it means to feel, because i havent had the
chance to see whats real.
i have felt the heartache,
that cripples many souls,
and i cannot just remember,
for how much mine i sold.
you are a wonderful artist of words... *(*_*) *