Sister

Seems i was born to live with you
Seems too natural to be unture.
The one who deserves all the love
Yet has been foolishly ignored

As a brother and pal
Memories I'll never forget.
Now miles and miles apart
Pray for you in my heart.

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Lee Mack 21 August 2009

Your poem 'Eyes' Man? If you are female the same applies; the poem is profoundly deprecating positively... I respond to your selflessness in other writing where you express language deficiency, but mostly to the life of your poem, so justly (melodic, terse, solo, ensembled) ... just enough words to get out of the way of sharing LIFE! set for reading and reading... Thanks: Lee Mack

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