She, is the most beautiful creature I have ever seen
She, is like a dream
Her lips are subtle like the petals of the reddest roses
Her eyes are round and wide, she is awake, she is alive
...
My heart doesn't belong to me
My heart belongs to another
Without them knowing
That my heart lies
...
Splendour
The beauty
of the snows subtlety
The way they drift,
quite delicately
As if each flake
was specifically designed, by an artist
of a kind
It seems quite fascinating
How only for a short amount of time
They tend to fall
So suddenly,
From the evening sky
Some people prefer philosophy
because its more
of a wondrous curiosity
then the falling of the snow
even though,
Its rather quite cold
don't you just admire
Its splendour
Isn't nature spectacular
Isn't nature a show
the emotion it brings to ones heart
reflects the purity
of ones soul
Beauty and subtlety
is the truest virtue
within us all.
Jackie, they're both amazing poems, you're such a special person and you have so much ability! I spotted a typo in the second one splendour it reads then the falling of the snow and I think you meant than the falling of the snow. Both brilliant, good on you!