Jameel Ahmed Ansari

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  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (4/16/2014 12:24:00 AM)

    The first sight, a beautiful encounter. You could express your deep longings to see those eyes smile.
    Keep it up. Keep writing.

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  • Robert Burns (4/16/2012 11:35:00 AM)

    YOUR, POETRY, BORING, IT IS NOT - I WAS WITH YOUR EVERY WORD, ENJOYING THEM AS THEY WERE BITS OF FRESH AIR - ROBERT BURNS, PORTLAND, OREGON, USA

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  • Jameel Ahmed Ansari (1/2/2012 12:36:00 PM)

    Thanks Lissa. I would surely love to read your poems too

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  • Lissa Spillman (2/26/2011 7:26:00 AM)

    Your poem is excellent. very insightful and profound.

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Best Poem of Jameel Ahmed Ansari

8: 30 Naihati Local

Continuation of my earlier poem “My Journey to Office”


Now starts the game of musical chairs,
Slightly different from the actual game of musical chairs,
If you are lucky you get a chair,
If you are not you start fuming in despair.

You have to board the train like a hungry animal.
You have to push shove and kick efficiently
You have to use your elbow in the strongest possible way,
You have to pounce on the vacant seats like a ferocious cannibal.

You have to face the feudalism of the so called daily passengers,
Once a daily passenger has ...

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