The hard working mother...
Never sleeps or rests
Pushing until light falls
And pulling until day breaks
...
MY dear rusting diamond,
Who are you trying to fool,
You say you fall in love fast,
But all you do is use i love you as a tool,
...
what is p.a.i.n,
pain is power asserting itself now,
usually expressed in the traumatizing rain,
letting your soul and your mind allow,
...
Watch me,
Give me some attention,
Don't you care for your child,
Who shed streams of blood,
...
The way she smiles in a bright sky,
The way she glows in my eyes,
The pride in her step,
The power in her stride,
...
Me and you,
We don't dwell in the same category,
Me and you,
Have the same story but different power,
...
A smile,
So full of life and energy,
Bringing forth light and warmth,
Yet, not this one,
...
I'm a teenager aspiring to be a well known poet.I would love your cricism on my poems.As well give me some helpful advice for the future.)
The Hardworking Mother
The hard working mother...
Never sleeps or rests
Pushing until light falls
And pulling until day breaks
The hard working mother...
Is the ice in the fire
Yet keeps moving with pride in her step
And motivation in her heart
The hard working mother...
Is like water,
Always taken for granted until needed,
Used everyday yet not noticed,
Takes different forms but is never awarded
The hard working mother...
Gets tired and frustrated,
Gives love and compassion,
Always needed never replaced
Only one day is given,
Only 24hrs is spared
To the hard working mother,
Whose burden was never shared