I'm a student studying BioScience at Canterbury Christ Church University. I've been writing for years as a hobby but never really showed anybody my work. I made this to get feedback from others so that I can improve my writing so feel free to leave criticism.
When the sun goes down and you are left in the dark
Your friends are gone so you can't have a lark,
You're all alone in the dark expanse of nowhere,
So cold you feel like stone and struggling for air
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Each day I look upon thee, oh sweet seraph of mine
Each day I look upon thee and see no flaw in thy design
Each day I sit in awe of such an arrant creation
Thy beauty so great, it can fell entire nations.
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As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death
My heart grows in its unrest.
My mind is trapped in a cage of fear
I dare not look up not even to leer
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You are the ocean
Vast and beautiful.
There is so much to you that I cannot comprehend, yet so much for me To love.
I was a rock
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They say love is like a war
And you'll come out feeling sore,
But you are all that I adore
And for you I'd become a soldier
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