Karthika Mukundh Poems

The squirrel was nibbling the sun
The tree was watching.

This is a poem I wrote in 'Tamil', my mother tongue. The word 'sun' in this poem means 'the sun light and the heat produced by sun in the day time'. I found it's the unique word in my mother tongue and we don't know how to translate that exactly with its feel. Let me know if it is correct.
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One day I went to hear a mountain's song
which was translating
the nature's love.
Countless were its
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Glowing like orange moon,
the setting sun
stayed put in the west
without sinking
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