I am a student at Montclair State University studying in Information Technology and minoring Computer Science. On the side I am learning guitar and I am also starting to write poetry. I started writing poetry in the beginning of my Fall 2010 semester because I started writing my feelings down and then I make a poem out of it. I really like being creative with everything in my life. Comments on my poetry would be gladly appreciated so I can either stay with what i have or improve on my writing.
Music is the energy within me
Music makes me stronger
Music makes me think
Music makes me emotional
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In the night I lay
Dreams of you appear
Showing all the wonders
That you have offered
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You control me with guilt
Knowing the one thing that gets me
You get what you want with this power
The power of guilt that is.
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Why won’t I flow?
I always am searching for it,
I can’t let things happen,
I have to to do something
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