Neelam Kumar Sharma

Neelam Kumar Sharma Poems

1. Come What May 12/28/2011

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  • Eddie Gibbons (12/29/2011 5:22:00 AM)

    Hello Neelam. Thank you for your message. I think you have the making of a good poem there. I can only suggest that you shorten the poem and try to distill your thoughts into four or five stanzas. There is a forum for critiques on this site - perhaps you could post your poem there. Also try ABC Tales. They have a lively community of both new and experienced writers who are very helpful with feedback. Best wishes and good luck with your writing! Eddie.

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Come What May

After two scores and ten,
Often it occurs to a man-
Something stirs in back of mind,
When one stares years behind.

Ahead one sees a silhouette,
Which one had not thought to see
Until that time, in worlds different,
That were in joy or in pain spent.

Then, slow or fast the years pass,
And the form grows & grows thus
Becoming more and more so clear,
Until it takes a shape familiar.

With it comes a sense of fear,
A melancholic despair-
An angst, a ‘nada’ unknown before,
Feeling of futility- a kind of bore.

As the years climb...

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