nicole rassbach Comments

POETS HAVE ONE THING IN COMMON. LOVE FOR THE PEOPLE AND THEY ARE LIKE SOLDIERS IN WAR.THEY RESCUE EACH OTHER, HELP EACH OTHER AND DIE FOR THE WHOLE COMMUNITY.THANK YOU FOR BEING A POET.

There is a noblest poetical feeling in this poem, but also morbid. Rather say romantic I should say more than a collection of surrealisitc sense. Keep writing.

That static scene 'I breathed in her lies/read the color of my eyes/all the tears i shed' has caught my attention because there is in this emotional tension, however, that delivery a self stirring, and despite this heightened sense of conflict there is also beauty and parallel of what it has been transformed. Well, I must keep reading you!