My dog can write better than you! He probably smells better than u 2! ! ! ! ! Try using your head for writting and not the thing inbetween your legs for a change huh? ? ? There are frigging 13 year olds in this damn site that make more sense than you! ! !

...you poor sick puppy, you need a good worming to get rid of the shit in your head.

a message from a god friend of mine says: 'you do Paris Hilton Perfectly! ! ! ' yea thats it..., he doesnt like u, he thinks ur uh...DUM

I HAVE to agree with everyone else who commented your writing! you suck! thats effin stoopid! lets just tell everyone that youre a slut...mm hmm...thats a perfect reputation...and un like The Queen of Pain...i will be a bitch...why? cos if you wana be talkin shit about me...saying for me to go cut myslef...then i can talk shit back...you dont even know me...so i dont even know why youre sending me shit...what? you dont have a life...so you gotta eff with everyone elses? here...get a notebook...and a pen...i want you to write some notes...GET A LIFE...QUIT EFFIN WITH EVERYONE ELSES...AND GET YOUR WHOREY ASS OFF THE CORNER AND WRITE SOME POEMS THAT ACTUALLY MEAN SOMETHING!

Well, I agree with the slut part, if nothing else. It's very scary to see that you actually have a following of some intelligent poets. Be careful. Words and an attitude like yours are going to get you in a lot of trouble. I would hate to count you among the growing list of those used and abused. Try branching out, write about anything and everything. And, who knows with a little more life experience, but hopefully not the dangerous kind, you may reach poet status, yet.

This poet is a profoundly influential slut bag. She makes the sun shine on her dirty vagina. Kudos and props and all that mess.

Further Adveneture of the Hoe...... Standing on the Corner in my hooker pants......... this is written for Jeff Hobbs