0075.Wishing I Were Sinking Poem by Sunset Moonshine

0075.Wishing I Were Sinking



I wish i were sinking,
So I could hear in the background,
Your voice singing,
All with out a single sound.

I wish i were sinking,
Cause then I can see the truth about you,
Maybe i won't have to start blinking,
Maybe not even thinking, but that will do.

I wish i were sinking,
Cause memories would flow,
To hazy for thought of me thinking,
That i want those memories to glow.

I wish i were sinking
Just so i can feel like im drowning,
So i can hear our voices,
With out a single one of my choices.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 20 January 2009

You write beauitful poems.. This is certainly my favorite one so far.. I can relate... I love the lines- I wish i were sinking, So I could hear in the background, Your voice singing, All with out a single sound. & I wish i were sinking, Cause memories would flow, To hazy for thought of me thinking, That i want those memories to glow. Well, I like those parts in it... well-written.. and i love it.

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