Saturday, March 27, 2010

032710b We Are Indeed Dust Comments

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sun painting my closet
i can see dust floating
tiny particles, enormous
i wonder how my lungs
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Manonton Dalan
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blank blank 07 April 2010

great poem. interesting wonder and conclusion, 'where did they come from/maybe house is turning to dust' 'tiny particles, enormous.' interesting contrast really nice. thanks

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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