1. Blinded Poem by Casual Diamond

1. Blinded

Rating: 5.0


I've seen the brightness fade from your eyes
The sights they should have seen
I can't believe you weren't seeing
Yet I believed
No new tricks up your slieve

And I'm still here fighting this losing battle (on my own)
Holding back the tide with mere sand
Watching sea eat land

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 13 March 2009

This is wonderful. The final line is blinding indeed (no pun intended) . Love it. HG: -) xx

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