Monday, April 21, 2008

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He flips the coin. Heads. He pauses, then he flips the coin once again.

Heads. He looks out the window of his car as if trying to figure out which way to go. The night is calm and steady.
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Issam Aladdin
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A very engaging read. Nice imagery. Not much more to say because Denis has already said it. Ez.

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Joseph Daly 21 April 2008

This is a good piece of work Issam. There is a banality which you manage to raise up, if you get what I mean. I like this because it illustrates the ordinariness within the extraordinary. That penultimate stanza is excellent Though I think thayt the opening sentence would make a great line on its own.

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