Thursday, April 13, 2006

10 Years After These Lines Bleed Me Comments

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Deanna More 15 May 2006

I enjoyed reading this scripted waterfall of fragmented thought, cascading down, in suggestive REGRETfulness of past 'could've-'s + should've-'s'. Very thought provoking! Clever ending ('if...and only if...') ...which spurs speculation in the reader's mind of possible 'maybe's' being considered. Well written! Deanna xx

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