Hannah Torres


11/16 Text - Poem by Hannah Torres

He texted me today.
I froze, I did not know what to say.
The man that I loved and wanted to be with.
The man that only say me as a physical object.
But maybe that was my fault.
I gave him what he asked for and wanted.
Hoping to get his love.
But only getting his lust.
His lusting after me.
After my body.
I always wondered if I was more to him then just some pretty lady.
If my body was just an addition to my mind.
If he saw just the curves of my body or the curves of my mind.
I honestly don't know if I was more then a body to him.
If my physical was more important to him then my mental.
All I know is that I felt like I lost him and his love.
But honestly he lost me and my love.

Topic(s) of this poem: love, pain, sad

Form: ABC


Comments about 11/16 Text by Hannah Torres

  • Souren Mondal (11/16/2015 10:47:00 PM)


    A very well thougt poem Hannah.. Although the syntax is really faulty.. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/16/2015 10:35:00 PM)


    She really loved him and sacrificed all she has, but he was a slave of lust, he could not feel her true love. He was a greater loser as he lost a real love. A very touching and beautiful poem! ...................10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2015



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