11 Days Poem by Julie Neises

11 Days

Rating: 5.0


11 days
since you left home.
I've just been waiting
here all alone.
You haven't called.
I thought we were friends.
I hoped this relationship
would be more than dead ends.
You don't take me seriously.
I can see why.
I may be young
but I was willing to try.
At least now I know
you just couldn't commit.
I'm single now,
and simply loving it!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stone Granite 15 July 2008

Freedom well expressed. A great write of moving on with optimism and courage! !

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