Sunday, June 8, 2008

20 Minutes Comments

Rating: 4.0

'Ding dong ding, '
an ascending triad rings out.
The door closes.
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Kel Smith
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Adeline Foster 01 November 2008

I'm with Greenwolfe, I don't really understand this although I can think of a few horrific stories that I heard coming out of Vancouver. I have sisters living on the Island so I am always looking for news from out there. If you have ever been out Ontario way, you may be interested in some of mine. Adeline

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 July 2008

Again, I have to admit my stupidity before the world, but I have no idea what this means and because the poem doesn't tell me, I simply can't make any comment. GW62

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Chocolate Bunny 08 June 2008

I like this it's very concise but you get to the point love it!

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