DAVID GERARDINO

23 Fitzroy Road, Fidgeting Smile

FIDGETING smile, drat that bone.
BREEZE sprang up, send all the
big bad vultures home.
CHEERFUL confusion makes
extraterresttrial laugh, drat that
bone, i know it come back.
LEAPING, leaping, leaping
like frog, finding no botten, better
call or phone home,
FIDGETING smile, drat that bone,
breeze sprang up, send all the bad
ass vultures home.

Poem Submitted: Friday, October 28, 2005
Poem Edited: Thursday, August 17, 2006

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Comments about 23 Fitzroy Road, Fidgeting Smile by DAVID GERARDINO

  • Ruby Root (7/7/2006 8:10:00 AM)

    Hi David, I love your poetry. It is really expressive and you write with great emotion. you have a lot to say in these poems of yours. Excellent.

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/2/2006 5:21:00 PM)

    WE END WHENCE WE START...CDEATIVE DECISIONING...''''''''''FRANK

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  • Linda HepnerLinda Hepner (11/11/2005 1:33:00 AM)

    How extraordinary, I have just commented on a poem of yours confusing 'cultures' with 'vultures' and suddenly see you have vultures in this one! Was the other one a subliminal message?

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  • Allan James Saywell (10/28/2005 10:28:00 PM)

    this poem is in the carter style it shows a lot of confusion wanders of in many directions you weren't a member of his poetry CLASS were you david OR MAYBE
    carter was your pupil

    REGARDS AJS

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