23 Fitzroy Road, Fix His Tie Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

23 Fitzroy Road, Fix His Tie

Rating: 4.9


HIS intence stare gradually
dissolved into tears, tears,
dripping off his cheeks, tears,
washing his hands, tears, cleaning
the heart, tears, giving him strengh
to fly again.
HE stands up, only to fix his tie,
then takes a deep breath, and
starts to fly again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 07 July 2006

You are an excellent writer David, I put these poems in my favorite list I hope you don't mind. Again you are an unique and original writer. I love the style of your poems.

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TRULY GIFTED YOU ARE...THE PICTORIALS ARE GRAPHICALLY PRISTINE...STRUCTURE WELL CRAFTED...TEN 4 *! '''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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TRULY GIFTED YOU ARE...THE PICTORIALS ARE GRAPHICALLY PRISTINE...STRUCTURE WELL CRAFTED...TEN 4 *! '''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 30 October 2005

Behind closed doors of addresses we sometimes share with another...often times not..there are times when we do release. We have to! David, you're on the cusp of Virgo and Libra? And a Rabbit OR Cat depending on which Asian calendar! YES, we would understand each other very well! L

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Allan James Saywell 29 October 2005

david it seems to be, well for you and i a day of tears, or should i say writing a poem about tears, which is a excellent subject for a poem are you doing well david i wrote a poem about a great racing mare who will try to make history on tuesday Austalian time keep your eye on the world news WARM REGARDS AJS

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