Wednesday, March 19, 2008

#251 Haiku Blaze Of Sunset Comments

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Explosion of clouds
Bursting blaze of sunset
As day becomes night
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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R H 11 May 2008

An intensely visual snapshot contained withing these 17 syllables - you captured those fierce moments of colour as day becomes night... lovely. justine.

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David Desantis 09 May 2008

I just wrote a poem saying 'as day becomes night' weird....but yours has alot more power in 3 lines than mine did!

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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