Tuesday, June 7, 2016

271. Gina Comments

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I want to kick your bull- -
and burn your truth
want to stand over the flames
to get high off the fumes
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 14 June 2016

i have issues with stanza #1, but the last one is really VERY FINE. i especially enjoyed: you couldn't reach my level no matter how long you climb: and but that won't ever be me bitch coz to me you are just dust: and your rhyming. but don't ya feel SORRY for people like that? come on. just a tiny bit sorry? bri ;)

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