i have issues with stanza #1, but the last one is really VERY FINE.
i especially enjoyed:
you couldn't reach my level
no matter how long you climb:
and
but that won't ever be me bitch
coz to me you are just dust:
and your rhyming.
but don't ya feel SORRY for people like that? come on. just a tiny bit sorry?
bri ;)
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i have issues with stanza #1, but the last one is really VERY FINE. i especially enjoyed: you couldn't reach my level no matter how long you climb: and but that won't ever be me bitch coz to me you are just dust: and your rhyming. but don't ya feel SORRY for people like that? come on. just a tiny bit sorry? bri ;)