Friday, July 4, 2008

.3. I Wanted Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wanted purple pebbledash
Instead they gave me blue
I wanted one large chimney
Instead they gave me two
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David Threadgold
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Gone with the wind 04 July 2008

This seems to be a very symbolic poem...so much hidden inside soft and dark words...'There was sand near my foot and all I saw was water'...A hearty 10 to you. Gul

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