Tuesday, October 14, 2008

#366 Haiku Oh My Love Comments

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Missing my love still
He is star in midnight sky
Sheltered in God's arms
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Very beautiful.I'm sorry for your loss.

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Velvet Thorn 14 October 2008

Beautiful imagery. I feel it too.

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Reshma Ramesh 14 October 2008

oh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! sooooo ssweet....well done and may god keep them safe

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Tai Chi Italy 14 October 2008

this one brought a tear because I have one or two bright stars up there too Dorothy and may all our shining stars shine on....great little haiku to the power of love....Well done. Waving at you, Tai, with a little tear just flying past her eye

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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